Great job Oliver. I love how you have used so many 'juicy' words in your writing. Keep up the great work! Mrs Hildred
good job Oliver
What a wonderful word picture. I would like to be playing with the children - can we go find some leaves to play in this weekend? That would be so great. Look at the tense (past, present) of each sentence in the word picture. Is every sentence using the same tense? Try changing the tense of the first sentence to match the other sentences. What do you think?